Sunday, August 8, 2010

Chapter 4,Ms. Kristi

Writing Assignment 1, time order

From Monday to Friday and one weekend day I have to work a job from 6:30a.m. to 3:30 p.m.. The first thing I do is wake up at 6:00, then brush my teeth and wash my face. I then fix myself a small a breakfast. After I eat I go to my basement and get dressed. Finally, I grab my keys and go to work. It only takes me about 20 minutes to get ready and ten minutes to drive to work, I have an advantage of living close to work.


Wrting Assignment 3, order of importance

I had the worst day of my life about two months ago on a Friday. First, I went to work and forgot my wallet at home. Next I was at work and my personal working machine broke down. Next I had a problem with my barber, I drove 20 minutes to go see him and he told me he could't help me because he had to be somewhere. Another problem that day was when I went to buy dog food my car trunk broke. Above all it started pouring rain hard on my way home. I felt like there were a flood of demons attacking me all that day.

2 comments:

  1. Thanks, John!

    Very good writing here! What is a 'personal working machine?' I am sorry about your bad day! It sounds terrible!

    --Kristi

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