Monday, June 7, 2010

NIGHT WATCH

This is a sad story with a shocking ending.The marine that took the sons place did something kind for the old man. He was mistakenly place there but made the best out of the situation. The real son should be grateful that someone stood by his father in his death bed and did not abandon him.
The marines made a horrible mistake by sending the wrong man but if the wrong man
won id have said anything it would have been too late anyways to kind the real son.The father felt at peace with this man by his side. he did not appear to know the difference.The real son should feel that this man that took his place was a gift. His father did not have to die alone.

1 comment:

  1. This is a very strong response to the narrative Juan carlos, that clearly states your interesting point of view. Just watch your use of syntax with your use of contractions. 10/10
    Rosemary

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